Sports Day- Structure of a Narrative

I am posting this because I am showing you the evidence that I am able to Identify the Structure of a Narrative Writing by using the text I read.

Story: Sports Day

Task: To identify the structure of the narrative story.

ORIENTATION - Where, When, Who When: The story began when she woke up in the morning. Who: Grace and her Mum where the characters in this story. During the sports day there were 3 more characters Mrs Miller, Justin and Emma.  Also some of the kids who were involved with their sports day. Where: The Story took place firstly in her house. Later on she had arrived at school for her sports day and was on the school field.

COMPLICATION - What is it? No one actually thought much of Grace’s sporting ability and they disliked her.

SEQUENCE OF EVENT - Plot -  What happened in sequence?  You can bullet point the main events. Grace hoped that it would rain because she didn’t enjoy sports and didn’t want to go Sports day. She arrived at school and watched the other kids play She was chosen by Emma to be in Emma’s team for Baseball. She had saw the ball was coming for her and had attempted to catch it with Emma approaching the ball as well. Grace opened her hands and had caught the ball comfortably in her hands while Emma was stung by a bee and fell.

RESOLUTION - How was the problem solved? Everyone cheered for Grace and Grace builded confidence to play sports.

CONCLUSION Grace had caught the ball and had threw it back to the home base while her team were cheering and the opposition were gutted yet surprised.

My Mihimihi

My Mihimihi

My Maori Mihimihi is linked above. Hope you enjoy it. 

Maths About Me

This is my Math's about me. I use numbers to explain things about me such as my height, my birthday, my age etc. 

Testing Reflection

This week was testing week. This week we had our PAT Maths and Reading Test and also our E-Asttle Writing and our Star Reading test. I am well above average in my Maths and I hope to maintain my progression or even get better.  In reading I am average and hope to work harder to be well above average. I am very pleased with my final result's. 

My Holiday Writing

Holidays, a time that is expected to do really fun activities but for me it was totally different which is usual.

My Holidays was a relaxing holiday because I hardly did anything but the thing that I really enjoyed was celebrating my little niece’s birthday, she was turning 3. It was a awesome day to go to the pools because it was such a hot day. We had decided to go to one of the newest pools in Auckland which was Otahuhu Pools. With Otahuhu being a Council pool it was free to enter. My Cousin, my cousin's boyfriend and my niece had came a picked me up so we could meet up with my cousins friend and her kids at the pools.

When had finally arrived at the Pools, I was glad because it started to get really hot. We walked in found our spot inside the pools and went off in the water. It was really refreshing when I was in the pool because the water was really cold. It didn’t last me a while to be cold so I decided to go into the spa pool. After a while I went outside where it was sunny and had a fun water park there. I played with my niece, I could tell that she was really enjoying herself and so was I. After a few hours having fun it was time for lunch,  we had Pizza and Chicken Nibbles.

After an awesome celebration for my niece's birthday we decided to head off because we were all tired from the swim. It was a great day, and also it was a great day to have a swim.

Welcome to my Learning Journal for 2016

Welcome to 2016

Talofa Lava, Welcome to my learning journey for 2016,

I am really looking forward for another year of learning. I am 11 years of age and in my last year of intermediate and will be heading to Sacred Heart next year. I am really passionate about Sports and I hope to be a sports journalist in the future. 

Thank you!