Friday, 1 November 2013

Prompt Writing 2

On a shining afternoon Sam and Ben were ready for their exciting surf day. So Sam and Ben quickly gathered up their gear and headed their way off to the beach. They were at the beach and the couldn’t believe how much people were there. So they were ready for a perfect surf day. The tide was in and the people were swimming and playing in the water. Sam and Ben said that they were into a big wave which they saw. They knew that they were in for a big wave. They went down to the beach and started to get ready for some surfing. Sam and Ben were having a lot of fun surfing and doing a little bit of swimming as well .After they were surfing and swimming they packed up their gear and went back to their towels.

1 comment:

  1. Patrick this is a good beginning to your narrative but when you only have 20 minutes to show your skills in writing a narrative you need to try and finish the whole story. Make sure you try to get your full story completed in the 20 minutes given.